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Sunday, February 24

  1. msg Great teacher message posted Great teacher That is so good to hear. I keep meaning to send you a message to see how you are getting on. What i…
    Great teacher
    That is so good to hear. I keep meaning to send you a message to see how you are getting on. What is it that you like about it? You are with Mrs Comber aren't you? Great to hear the spark is still there. :)
    7:51 pm
  2. msg Great teacher message posted Great teacher Yay! My new school is so exciting!:)
    Great teacher
    Yay! My new school is so exciting!:)
    7:30 pm

Friday, December 7

  1. msg Great teacher message posted Great teacher Thank you miss hurliman! We put alot of effort into it. Everyday we would practise, once even all d…
    Great teacher
    Thank you miss hurliman! We put alot of effort into it. Everyday we would practise, once even all day!
    11:26 pm

Wednesday, December 5

  1. msg Great teacher message posted Great teacher I will forgive you, just. Your mum does make good muffins. I didn't get a chance to catch up with y…
    Great teacher
    I will forgive you, just. Your mum does make good muffins. I didn't get a chance to catch up with you today either, maybe tomorrow since I don't have duty. Loved your dance today. Really like how you had the different combinations and mixture if high and low.
    8:24 pm
  2. msg Great teacher message posted Great teacher Im sorry. My mum made muffins for the class and i was going to give one to you, but everyone ate th…
    Great teacher
    Im sorry. My mum made muffins for the class and i was going to give one to you, but everyone ate them all!:( sorry
    7:43 pm

Tuesday, December 4

  1. msg Great teacher message posted Great teacher Can't wait. I will come looking for you :)
    Great teacher
    Can't wait. I will come looking for you :)
    11:48 pm
  2. msg Great teacher message posted Great teacher Ok! I might i have a goodie for you on Thursday! If I see you around I will hand it to you
    Great teacher
    Ok! I might i have a goodie for you on Thursday! If I see you around I will hand it to you
    11:17 pm

Saturday, December 1

  1. msg Great teacher message posted Great teacher I think this is a great start. I like the vocab you are using, words like craning and cluster. Just…
    Great teacher
    I think this is a great start. I like the vocab you are using, words like craning and cluster. Just be careful not to put too many similes and descriptions in. Ok what you have so far, be careful not to overdo it otherwise sometimes the reader spends so much time picturing what is there, they can lose sight of the plot. Send me the next instalment, I can't wait to read the rest.
    6:44 pm
  2. msg Great teacher message posted Great teacher Do you think this is a good start to my story? Please give me feedback so i can work on it. The…
    Great teacher
    Do you think this is a good start to my story? Please give me feedback so i can work on it.

    The mist hung over the streets of New York,clouding your eyesight. The air had a tang to it, almost like a scent of peppermint was permanently strung to it. The air was also mixed with the smell of the sea. The beach was just around the corner, the waves this night were vicious. They crashed along the bay and sea foam flew up into the air. The moon appeared behind the cluster of clouds, shining like a diamond in the light. To your right you would see trees looming great heights over you, even the most tallest man would have to crane his neck backwards to see them. Sky scrapers and towers cut into the night sky, covering the twinkling stars.
    6:36 pm
  3. msg Great teacher message posted Great teacher Awww thank you:) ill see you on monday!
    Great teacher
    Awww thank you:) ill see you on monday!
    6:15 pm

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